kenne ich nich...ahja,englisch is fertig...:
The Shapiro family left Minerva, because they wanted to go to New York to Daniel’s bar mitzwah party. On their way to New York, Mr. Shapiro had a bad nightmare .He dreamed an old bag lady attacked him with a street gang. But suddenly he woke up , because the bus driver shoutet: ‘42nd street station: everybody out’ where they had breakfast. They wanted to visited the statue of Liberty. But first they took the bus and rode through great Midtown. After that they took a boat tripto Staten Island ferry, after that they go back at Battery Park. They plant to see the statue of Liberty, the UN Building and the Empire state Building. The Shapiro’s had a cup of coffee at the deli. Mr. Shapiro was shocked when he saw the old bag lady. She looked like the woman in his dream. They took the subway to the Empire state Building. They went downstairs when they saw a crazy-looking man. The crazy man explained the meaning of ‘Big Apple’. He talked about jazz musicians. They play their gigs in New York City, the biggest apple. Mr. Shapiro was emberassed and they took the elevator to the 102nd floor. They was on the Top of the Empire state Building. The view was fantastic. On the way down Mr. Shapiro noticed that he missing his wallet. He thought the black guy has got his wallet. He was shocked as the crazy-looking man gave him his wallet. The Shapiro’s were shopping at Macy’s. After that they went West in the 68th. They had great fun at Daniel’s bar mitzwah party.
entdeckt jmd. nen fehler?soll im simple past geschrieben sein!!!
edit: der 1500te post is auch mein